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   tutorphil says:

   22 September 2011 at 07:56

   Hey Matthew - this is a very positive beginning, but you need to think in less generic, and more exaggerated terms - think in terms of a coral reef - right now it looks as if big ben has some oblongs attached to it, which seem standardised - think about it more 'organically' - imagine the environment building up in layers - one shape upon another:
   
   http://www.treehugger.com/shanty-towns.JPG
   
   http://www.awesomestories.com/images/user/3cb368d7a4.jpg
   
   But also think more creatively about the shapes etc - the components from which those layers are made:
   
   search for '1940s' cars/ships/planes/factories/trains etc. - all the components that would be scavenged and assembled put to original uses...