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   Jackie says:

   14 May 2012 at 11:26

   Looking good Matt! :)
   At around 27 secs, when the pirates first appear, there is something funny going on with the camera - it sort of pulls in and out again and it makes it looks like the planes are going backwards for a second or so...

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   tutorphil says:

   15 May 2012 at 02:22

   Hey Matt - I think there's too much of a lag between the pull away from the big plane to the entrance of the fighter planes - I was tapping my fingers, thinking 'okay, what next?'. Also, I really think you should start working with your music and a specific duration; because the relationship between the music and how long this piece is will also help you determine the pace and point of your various scenes; it will also drive the length of shots and use of montage; at the moment, I can't help observing that you're pre-vizzing in a bit of a vacuum - and I'd seek to commit to what your final piece actually 'is' - and I'd use the music to structure things more concretely.