This is a list of my main final ideas

for my story, I have looked at many possible routs for it go in

but for my final story:

The mermaid is very very small (thumb sized) the mermaid at first lives with in a small pond in a garden, where a man keeps many other mini mermaids, the first scene is where the metrmaid is swepped up and put into a plastic bag; then cuts to the mermaid being put into a fish tank, whilst this the camera picks out the slight ditail of the fan in the corner of the room. when the guy walks past with a drink that has a cocktail umbreller with in it, the umbreller is then blown by the fan into the water of the fish with out the guy knowing (in an erlier pan of the room u will spot that the tank is next to a kitchen with a sink)

The mermaid then has a ureeka idea of flying the cocktail brolly to the sink... Using the air filter (chest) to prepell her self up to the serface and above, she uses the umbreller to get to the tap... This is where chalenge lyes, the fan is a turning fan and the umbreller only stays up as long it gets an extra blast from the fan (in this time mermaid is also drying out and has to get to the sink quickly) so it gives us a race against time to get to the sink...

And the she's getting further away from the fan, the less air she's getting so the more she's dropping, so panicking she ends up trying to blow the umbrella up her self... In the near to the end scene you see from the sinks perspective of the mermaid disappearing under the view of the edge of the sink, with a slight few seconds pause, you see the mermaids arm leap over the edge and gaining grip and climbing up, after this you then see the mermaid slide down the metal basen of the sink and the last scenes from her perspective sliding down the plug hole like a water slide.





(seperate idea)
(this story could be highly more extended onwards on the whole on how she gets to the ociean through the suers, and there being a Mini world under suers taking refuge and influence from films like Bugs life or Ants)


This is my essay structure. I'm basing my essay on Finding Nemo

introduction

ESSAY

Part1. - Finding Nemo

Who is Nemo?

What does he do?

Where does he go?

What adventures Does he have?

Who does he meet?(who help and course him trubble)

How and why does he get into trouble?

How are Nemos emotions portrayed

What are the Mager Relationships

Part. - Andrew Stanton(50 words)

Part. - The cast (50 words)

Part. – Story

Part. - Structure

Part. - Editing and order of scenes

Part. - Camera movement

Conclusion